Example
Task: Should university
education be free? Discuss.
Plan:
Organize your
ideas into a clear paragraph structure.
Paragraph
1: Introduce the topic and say
what the current situation is.
Paragraph
2: Describe your arguments for
the topic
Paragraph
3: Describe your arguments
againsit the topic
Paragraph
4: Write a conclusion and give
your awn opinion. You could also include suggestions or
recommendations.
Useful
language:
Introducing
the topic: Many people thing
However, others It is thought
Adding
ideas: Furthermore Morevoer In
addition to this
Giving
reasons and results: One result
Because of Conswquently
Contrasting
ideas: On the one hand One
advantatge of However
Giving
examples: For example An
example of this
Making
suggestions: Should Would be a
better solution
Weighing
up the arguments: On balance
All in all Overall
Expressing
you own opinion: Personally In
my opinion
Writing:
It is clear that society needs doctors, teachers and
other people with university degrees. Nevertheless, higher education
is expensive and some people believe tha government should pay for
it. There are arguments fo and againist this idea.
One of the arguments for free university education is
that university courses can be very expensive. For instance, training
as a doctor can cost thousands of pounds. Unless students come from
wealthy families, they may not be able to afford it. Furthermore, it
is claimed that if local universities cost too much, students will go
abroad to study and might not return. Consequently, the country will
lose valuable skills and the economy will suffer.
There are also arguments againist the idea. For example,
some people in society are very wealthy and they can easily afford
fees. People also say there are too many unemployed graduates and
that government should encourage more young people to consider
vocational careers.
On balance, I do not think university should be free for
everyone because other in society need the money more. However , the
government should support poorer students so everyone has acces to
education.
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