Hi today I'm going to talk about my holidays,
First
after finishing school I went to Pals to have a Sant Joan celebration
with our American friends and it was very funny and exciting. Then
after that we watched all the firecrackers, I went to swim in the
pool with these friends.
Then
I spent some days on the beach with
my family and I went to aquadiver. We had a lot of fun there. I met
new people and I swam a lot. In conclusion, I had a wonderful time
with my family, I enjoy the time and the moments that I spent in a
very relaxing 3 days on the beach of Palamós and I hope to return
next year.
The
rest of the summer I stayed on Banyoles. Every morning I had rowing
trainings and in the afternoon I met friends to go to swim on the
lake or go to Porqueres to play with them on the playstation 3 in my
house or in their house.
In
conclusion, I spent a nice holidays with my family and I wished a
never ending summer, I hope you like my presentation .(:
Thank
you for listening.
CLASSMATES SUMMER
Laura: She rode horse. She spent nice time doing horse competitions. The last days of summer she went to the beach.
Nina: Everyday she had swim training and after them she met friends. She stayed 8 days in Iceland and she visited 'geisers'
Ona: She did a swimming championship and in August she stayed in Platja d'Aro
Lluis J: He stayed in a flat in Roses for a month then he swam in the lake and played tennis every day
Marc P: Spent all the summer on Fonalleres(a little village near the beach). He went o Portaventura 3 days
Lluís S: He went camping on the USA for 3 weeks where he di waterskiing then he went to Menorca.
Isaac: He played tennis tournaments every week. He spend weeks relaxing at home. In September prepared all the things for school. ORAL PRESENTATION
Observation of your oral presentation:
Presentation
Did you use any resources? NO
Were the resources relevant and attractive? NO
Did you show/talk about the photos to the audience? NO
Body Language and eye contatc
Did you look at your audience most of the time? NO
Did you read from your notes? Yes
Did you do any gesture/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Yes
Structure
Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear?
Wich ones? First,Then and Finally
Content
Did you introduce interessting information to your audience? Yes
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the interenet/ books...? No
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? Superficial
Language
Did you check your grammar? No
Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? No
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, And But
Did you use fillers? No
Pronounciation and Intonation
Did you know how to pronounce all your word? Did you check the pronounciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No
Did you change your tone of voice? Yes a little bit
Did you speed in a fluid continuum? Fluid and continuum
Self-Evaluation
What mark did you get? 7
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