miércoles, 7 de octubre de 2015

MY LAST SUMMER PRESENTATION


Hi today I'm going to talk about my holidays,

First after finishing school I went to Pals to have a Sant Joan celebration with our American friends and it was very funny and exciting. Then after that we watched all the firecrackers, I went to swim in the pool with these friends.

Then I spent some days on the beach with my family and I went to aquadiver. We had a lot of fun there. I met new people and I swam a lot. In conclusion, I had a wonderful time with my family, I enjoy the time and the moments that I spent in a very relaxing 3 days on the beach of Palamós and I hope to return next year.

The rest of the summer I stayed on Banyoles. Every morning I had rowing trainings and in the afternoon I met friends to go to swim on the lake or go to Porqueres to play with them on the playstation 3 in my house or in their house.

In conclusion, I spent a nice holidays with my family and I wished a never ending summer, I hope you like my presentation .(:

Thank you for listening.





CLASSMATES SUMMER

Laura: She rode horse. She spent nice time doing horse competitions. The last days of summer she went to the beach.

Nina: Everyday she had swim training and after them she met friends. She stayed 8 days in Iceland and she visited 'geisers'

Ona: She did a swimming championship and in August she stayed in Platja d'Aro

Lluis J: He stayed in a flat in Roses for a month then he swam in the lake and played tennis every day

Marc P: Spent  all the summer on Fonalleres(a little village near the beach). He went o Portaventura 3 days         

Lluís S: He went camping on the USA for 3 weeks where he di waterskiing then he went to Menorca.

Isaac: He played tennis tournaments every week. He spend weeks relaxing at home. In September prepared all the things for school.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ORAL PRESENTATION                                                                                  


Observation of your oral presentation:

Presentation
Did you use any resources? NO
Were the resources relevant and attractive? NO
Did you show/talk about the photos to the audience? NO

Body Language and eye contatc
Did you look at your audience most of the time? NO
Did you read from your notes? Yes
Did you do any gesture/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Yes

Structure
Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear?
Wich ones? First,Then and Finally

Content
Did you introduce interessting information to your audience? Yes
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the interenet/ books...? No
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? Superficial

Language
Did you check your grammar? No
Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? No
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, And But
Did you use fillers? No

Pronounciation and Intonation
Did you know how to pronounce all your word? Did you check the pronounciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No
Did you change your tone of voice? Yes a little bit
Did you speed in a fluid continuum? Fluid and continuum

Self-Evaluation
What mark did you get? 7

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